I want the best for job seekers, those who use my career marketing services, those who use my colleagues’ services, and those who choose to go it alone. I love Margo Rose’s #HireFriday concept. Margo has opened the door for so many job seekers to get in front of people who could be their next employer.
But as I said in the post I wrote for HRMargo:
As I have watched job seekers put themselves out there on #HireFriday, I have seen some so ready for the opportunity and others, well… not so ready. Just like in the traditional job search, if you are pushing yourself out there with a low-level résumé and no strategy for what to say when you are contacted by a potential employer, you will end up disappointed.
What signs do I see that make job seekers less likely to be chosen?
1. → Leave out dreaded dinosaur terms, “responsible for”, which I covered in my post, “Is there a dinosaur in your resume?” When I look at someone’s resume or LinkedIn profile and see those words, I cringe, much like the sound of fingernails on a blackboard. Resumes and now the related LinkedIn profile and other bios on social media must speak with the active voice.
2. → Don’t waste space by positioning your headings in a left column and starting the content in a column two inches into the page. This format makes you look dated and doesn’t let you have full use of the space on the resume. You can left-justify your headings or center them but don’t let them take the valuable real estate on the side of the resume.
3. → Replace lengthy, boring objective statements: “I want a challenging position in the field of blah-blah-blah, that I can grow and find opportunities for career growth…” Outdated and me-focused, professional resume writers have turned to banner headlines that speak exactly what the objective is: Financial Services Analyst / Associate and subheadings like Mergers & Acquisitions / Securities & Investments / Research & Compliance. Or perhaps a graphic banner:
4. → Often missing in resumes is a profile, something to engage the reader right off the bat and let them know the value of the candidate. See this one:
Innovative, Proactive Construction Management Professional with extensive experience in directing high producing teams as well as heavy equipment operation. Significant experience in instruction and teaching. In 2006, trained 45 personnel from DoD active, Guard, and Reserve military units. Project-oriented, skilled at multi-tasking and managing multiple projects simultaneously with a vision for results. Driven for tangible accomplishments with an equal drive for quality control. Highly analytical, with strong problem-solving and troubleshooting skills, always seeking new ways to solve old problems. Drilling expert; evaluated costs / labor / manpower estimates for wells in Spain / Haiti.
Or
Results-oriented, customer service-focused executive, with a 15 year track record of driving innovative revenue-producing strategies and products for one of the top Fortune 500 banks in America. Organized professional with the ability to conceptualize, analyze, and see both profitability and customer service sides of issues. Repeatedly took on new challenges and delivered creditable and impressive results to senior leadership. Committed to excellence, extending to relationship building, inspiring team members, and gaining the respect of others.
To succeed in your job search or #HireFriday, you need to market the product.
What product? YOU (the job seeker) are the product in the job search.








Good post – you made me go back and check my resume (and LinkedIn profile). Yep, I found and corrected a few of these. Thanks for the great post!
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Ha! You have a face again! Now come visit whenever you want. You can say hi to Ed Han, he should be here somewhere! And Jane Woods… and the other regulars!
Welcome, Michael! I hope you will come back again! Now we have to get your Gravatar set up so you can smile back at my blog community! I’m glad it helped. You can also leave the topics you would like to see covered here. I welcome inspiration!
Love this post, Julie. It gets straight to the heart of it. In Australia we have longer resumes than in the states. But we do need to hit people in the eye and make it easy for people to read a resume. I read somewhere that tweeters make better job seekers as they knew how to be concise. Not sure if that’s true, but it’s good discipline anyway.
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Tweeting certainly does make you look at words differently. I know other resume writers who say that it has tightened their writing so much. I believe if has done the same for me. I’m glad you liked it. Thank you for stopping by to visit and I hope you will come again! I do have to follow your post link above (love CommentLuv for that reason) grilling, huh?
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